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Old 08-08-04, 03:09 PM   #14
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v/madstyles ....good battle u guys skllz barely took dis one....he had bettr punches i like that 'chew b4 swallow line funny shit..your structure was poor though...good rhyme sheme and u should step yo vocab up.......
hard to lose nice try dawg but i think the only advantage u got on this on is yo structure ..work on yo vocab and punchlinez and you should take a battle ez...no hatin

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