This was an Amazing drop in my opinion.All the emotion was extroardinary and your rhymes were real hot.I liked how the 'him' version was a tough guy and he was trying to be real macho,and the 'her' was dissing him by saying embarassing stuff about him that was funny.You are a real good poet and keep on writing.Maybe next month's poet will be you!Goodluck and rep hard.
9/10.

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