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Old 08-08-04, 04:40 PM   #18
Adam
 
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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

FuxJustAWord - good structure, good flow, and some rhymes, i liked the closer that was good shit. cept your first line hahaha....wack... work on your punches and add more multis and you should be good.

Barz&Penstripes - uh you gotta elevate bro, some of your shit didn't even really rhyme, structure was wack and flow was off, punches not really that solid either

Structure And Flow - FuxJustAWord
Punches - FuxJustAWord
Rhymes And Wordplay - FuxJustAWord

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Vote/ FuxJustAWord...was all around better