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Old 08-08-04, 05:19 PM   #9
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

ok this was a nice battle, but i think Lady Fiya took this one.

Manip, you had some nice lines. But yo first line you rhymed wit the same word which is a big no-no. Also, some of yo lines were pretty stretched. So that made the flow go off a little. but overall, you did an aiight job.

Fiya, you had a nice verse. You had a tight opener and the PSA line was nice too. Good job in the punches section. Yo flow was also very nice. It kept up good throughout the whole verse. Nice job overall on yo verse.

Vote/Fiya no hate. pc
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