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Old 08-08-04, 09:04 PM   #30
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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hard hitter
whoa structure was terrible..honestly horrid..it kinda messed up ya flow..
.first punch was wack second was wack...rest were pretty tight other than that
personals were sparse..but good...all around fair verse..not fully showin ur talent
ok verse i guess though structure need work
overall 7/10

limited edition
whoa..damn man..ur verse was wack..ur my boy..i expect much much better
from you..what the hell went wrong? weak punches fair name personals..
kinda wack structure..all around kinda wack verse..punches were slightly weaker
than hard hitters
overall 6.8/10

close battle..herb fest...lol...j/k...
my vote hardhitter
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