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Old 08-08-04, 10:45 PM   #11
KroNuz
 
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If You Want Constructive Critiscm, Here Ya Go.....

Example
Say Someone Was Makeing Fun Of You At School Or Anywhere, You Would Think Of A Diss Back Right?, And You Want That Diss To Be Truthful So It Hurts More, Well Same Thing In Battleing, Think Of Things You Know About The Person Your Battleing, And Diss Them, Also Have An Equal Flow, Dont Just Say A Diss, Make A Diss That Flows Good, Hits Hard, Is Truthful, And That The Reader Will Understand, Also, Dont Bring Mainstream Rappers Into Your Verses, Its Been Done Many Times, Try To Be Original And Witty...

There That Should Be Enough To Help You Out For Now...
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