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Old 08-08-04, 10:58 PM   #2
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Voted For: **FLEx**

ok fr you aint rhyme half your shit and you aint hit no good punches which basically means you cant even talk shit good and thats bad.elevate on punches.flex you also need to elevate on punches but at least you had some.good struture and flow on both but fr you strech your lines too far.flex good disses and vocab but try to use better vcab at the end of your sentences.flex wins with harder punches and a better verese
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?