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Old 08-09-04, 12:44 AM   #9
Ca'lam
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ok now.. omg and state you both know ya'll my niggas.. so there shoul dbe no question bout this bing a hate vote.. dick ryding vote or nething like that..



state: your verse wasent the hottest i seen from you fam.. iv seen you rip cats like poor peoples tee shirts.. this just gave him paper cuts.. you had iight lines in there..
Band's Lines are Cold, I thought You'd be used to the cali weather by now.. (profile)
You Garbage Pal, The Trash Multi's You Spit Got Me wondering, HOW?!?..
^prolly one of your best lines... id give this verse like a 5.9-6.1/10 cant deside.. wasent uo to your stadards....


omb: thats structure withthe devided paragraphs and hyphens gotta go.. but what you were spittin was pretty hard ish.. my fav lines:
This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet..
an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?..
I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller..
forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler..

Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that..
heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap..

theres more..i thought this verse was pretty damn hott.. out of 10, that shit waslike a 7.9.. flow was on point.. punches were hittin.. ery thing was there cept that busted ass structure nigga.. off that ish foreal..
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