aiight
708 ya whole verse was definitly hot
the way it all flow to gether
and made sense i was feeling ya whloe verse
structure was good
punches 9-10
overall9-10

shadow
i was feeling ya opener
but the rest was medoker
sturcture 8-10
punches hit hard but not hard enoough
ya feel me


plz return the fav fellas anh put a honest vote on my battles

the one vs pay day
the one vs valor