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Voted For: e-dubz
E-Dubz=That was a decent lil verse.I take it in line 3 you made that word "cents" so it make it look like you wasn't rhyming the same word,but I caught on.Nice ender.
Bang=Umm..the punches were just not hard enough.Those punches could have been better.And next time,try to make your structure more even so it would flow better.
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