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Old 08-09-04, 03:48 AM   #13
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Voted For: J DOT

fr ok flow and thats it no punches no disses no wordplay it was really bad you need to work more on metaphores and personals and you will be ok.j good drop but some of your shit aint rhyme work on that.ok punches wordplay was off as well as flow but jdot had a better overall verse still this was a whacked battle
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?