Thread: A Breath Of Freestyle-give Me Feedback
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Old 08-09-04, 10:13 AM   #2
BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
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k man for a freestyle you diddent rhyme you sucked so bad these are what i rate you
wordplay:0/10
punchlines:1/10
flow:0
man that was wack shit lol
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