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Old 08-09-04, 11:32 AM   #3
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Some nice rhymes. You should concentrate a bit more on keeping your flow on one level but other than that the lyrics were pretty hot.

"Anything worth mentionin'..lynchin' me all on one accord..
Talkin' about "He Must Hang" like that wonderful Ford..
I'll edge you crooked rappers up with axes..the Headlines..
Would read: Rappers dead from hairline fractures..start askin'.."

that was my favourite part. Nice wordplay and complex rhymes.
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You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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