I like your style but your flow is off quite a bit. Try to keep all your bars the same syllable length. Still not bad lyrically. Keep em comin, also wat ya think of my verse Death Wish?????

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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