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Old 08-09-04, 02:33 PM   #16
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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Voted For: definatfully

SIMPLE..........DEFINATEL WINS THIS.

D-BLUE...lotta ur lines dnt rhyme.no punches no nothin.
structure is weak.u need to make ur lines tha same length.....
id give ur verse 2/10///.u need to elevate.

def-some ok metas..no punches really.structure a lil off,but decent.flow woz ok........
4/10.....jus keep elevatin.

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