the medicine man
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IP:
Voted For: Typical
Typ definitely different than im used to reading
not worse just...... different
i can tell your practicing ya wordplay and struc
but dont let ya strenghs, which is ya vocab and metas,
suffer for it, liked the verse
especially 'spit pyro to smoke kronik thats hot
demon good rhyme as well just some probs wit it
1st pick up ya vocab, good struc good flow
punches could be more potent and limit filler lines like ya ending, it kills ya overall verse
i gotta give this to typ even thogh he didnt blatantly killem like he usually does
no hate definitely the truth
B$ i hate on someone i just wont vote
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