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Old 08-09-04, 07:52 PM   #5
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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vet? didn’t know you exist, just like ur type gettin’ mo’ microscopic
leveled on petri dishes, ya tryna fit like fat people on island tropics!
truth you can’t dodge it, ya multis can’t replaced ur nonsensed logic
lackin’ knowledge, think u know me cuz you researched my audit?!*
this fraud tryna be clever, lost 2 rulers-->ya lines equal no measure!**
beat ya ass w/ pleasure, shrink font size 2 make his verse look better!
u gifted? your scrolled-lyrics are what RV uses to wipe our ass with!
ur rules: 20 lines in length, notice he couldn’t limit the fuckin’ width!
loose structured, this dumb ass accept this battle just to get tortured!
round 2?! my avatitties tired of feedin’ you, it’s done u’re nurtured!
underrated? u battle newbies-> tha best way 2 respect, recognition!
more offense-> your text is rated under any html and java scriptions!
ya can’t decently spit in time-limit if God was 2 pause every clock!
...verse stopped->ur way to come hard & fresh= ur freezer + ziplock!
your best lines--> empty ONEs not even your ‘fans’ would stand in!
this MAN dial-up to broadBAND, 2 get his rhymes off ‘demandin’!***
wanderin’ all over the board FINALLY by HardWood you got fostered!
they made you feel at home, but actually lost your name in the roster!


-I don't need to reach the line limit to merk a bitch!, wut's good, nigga?! j/p lol good luck, just blazin' NIKKA!-
*audit: records
**lost 2 rulers(vets),lost ruler- no measure
*** his name One-Man-Band, dial-up, broadband, ‘demandin’

if ya don't get the wordplay or punches, don't vote.. simple..
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