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This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
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damn this battle was real close,but since im in her crew,i cant vote.anyways,fiya,your verse was incredible to say the least.Wordplays and multies were on almost every line,your structure was pretty damn good.I didnt really like the parts when you were dissing his name,but every verse has its flaw.
This might be one of your best battles ive seen.The only thing I didnt understand is when you said his text was rated under html and java scriptions but im sure its real good.lol.damn nice drop and keep on doin yo thang.
One man band,your verse was madd hot also.Make your font bigger,thats the only thing.
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