Voted For: Red Bull
Red BUll:
ocelot was easy to defeat, thats the only reason you won. the punch hit, but it wasnt strong. cussing in your rhymes is a newbish way to fill in words where complex vocab could be. so try not to swear, it doesnt help. first line was a good opener for this bar, but the second line didnt finish off what you began to accomplish.
i give this a 5/10
5 points b/c: lack of structure, comdey, and closure.
positive: you had some multis, keep that up.
congrats on your win.
vote:Red Bull
return the honest favor.
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or hit up a battle in my sig. use expalined votes please, thanx