Voted For: Triple_N
Ya garbage and whats worse is u didn't write dat
So u can't fight back, cuz you also bite wack
^DECENT OPENER
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^OK COULD'VE BEEN WRITTEN CLEANER
You'll be here all alone still doing ya shitty spittin'
Foreva losin' cuz our obituaries will still be betta written
^DECENT PUNCH
Ya rhymes rightful place is in bedpans and bathroom stalls
Shabba Ranks new theme song is Hey!! peptobismol
^NICE..FUNNY PUNCH
Your a fakin' jamaican that can be taken anyday
Only way u jamaican is if ya 1st name's ray and last is gay(reggae)
^OK PERSONAL
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^^OK..CLOSER NOTHIN SPECIAL
Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^NICE FLOW..OK PUNCH
This kids soft, ill give him a punch to his gut and puncture his insides...
And i wouldnt be his friend online...cuz he Literally Dickrides*...
^DECENT PUNCH
You not on my level, so you better proceed with caution...
I run through kids like you, and raise the bar like polevaulting...
^WAS'NT FEELING THIS..POOR RHYME
This dudes a bitch, Ill hand him a loss, then ill hand em some clips...
And when he got cum on his lips, is the only time he talkin slick...
^^OK CLOSER..COULD'VE BEEN BETTER
overall im gonna go with triple n on this his punches connected better but some lines you played in both verses it would've been better if both had dropped the same amount of bars.........decent battle but it seemed like both came fairly weak.........
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