Originally Posted by rush

DV8 fo goodnes sake yo rhymes are played out and ya weak/
yo ass cant get a sneak peek of this so take yo ass to sleep/
->>punch didnt make any sense at all

while u sleep how about u count some sheep u fuckn freak/
my rhymes are so fuckn deep so please keep up with me/
->>dude....first line was terrible second line wasnt much better

6lines to me is is kinda of weak so i guess your ass is cheap/
i'm done so ii'm fin to take a leak/
->>no...

peace to u cause this shit was kinda easy//
->>is this part of your verse?

->>No hate to you man but this is one of the weakest battle verses ive ever seen. Im tired and grouchy so I would usually try to be nicer about it but still that was terrible. You gotta elevate like a mile before you get in battles like this. Im not trying to be a dick but seriously. Read the tutorials and just get in some battles with people more on your level. We all start somewhere and this was just not a good battle for you to be in.

Originally Posted by DV8

if you think your winning this your a "miss-taken" like i jus abducted the bitch in you,
nobody likes ya or "peeps" your shit,damn even the mods are starting ta ignore you,
->>good first line...second line was decent but it didnt rhyme except you/you

Battlin me? ya brains doin a“tight rope act”ya minds lossed a sense of balance,
Actin hard but U only”hold ya own”when ya mommy’s handin ya your allowance,
->>worded kinda choppy in the second line but hilarious

Stitch this bitch’s“threads”with FUBU cause this kids getting F.ucked U.p B.uy U.s,
kid wantsta be a gansta but he still ask his parents ta stop n shops at toys-r-us,
->>pretty good first line. weak punch in the second line.

I kno im feared,ya best wipe your eyes of those tears b4 ya mascara gets a smeare,
Really This aint a “greenhouse” so this “herbs dome” aint “enlightened ”round’ere,
->>haha...it was funny but kind of a stretch

Shit kid I could still win if I was “dyslexic” written in a mirrored image bout physics,
Your punches always go unnoticed n disregarded like mothers day in abortion clinics
->>physics?...awesome second line

with ya pathetically funny battle stats,ya might be able ta lead a crap noobie six pack,
go ahead "rush" try ta say im wack,but when i left you begged my ass ta come back,
->>weak rhyming because the emphasis in six pack is in the vowel sound in six as opposed to the word pack. hah now that my analysis is finished it was a decent closer

->>DV8 you took this easily...not your greatest verse ever but it easily took rush's. You had a touch of wording issues and some bad rhyming. Your punches were on point for the most part though and you had the battle easily...who called whom out in this one?