I felt like both of these verses were really weak but heres my hounest opinions/vote...

MC SYX: Sketchy structure, good vocab near the end (although it started to not make sense), and some words did not rhyme. I just wasnt feelin ya flow man, some ok punches in there i suppose...3/10

Afropimp: haha, good closer, i dug it. alright vocab...needs to be elevated a bit, also had a sketchy structure (hard to see what words ya rhyming), good punches, alright flow...5/10

My vote goes to Afropimp in my hounest opinion because his verse flowed a lot better and actually had decent punches...