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Old 08-10-04, 04:53 AM   #1
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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

nice structure,good punches..some nice personals...overall you took this battle in every catagory...good rhyme scheme 2..the only thing ya were missing was good wordplay...
chitown...not a nice verse...more self glorification than anything ta be honest....need ta elevate kid..
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