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MaNiPuLaTiOn vs marvolousj1009
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08-10-04, 05:29 AM
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
i gotta give this manip she came with better structure n pretty good personal punches flow was good in most parts.i liked your wordplay,it was nice...marv..i got where you were going with your punches but they jus werent written wright..you had some really good idea's but jus dint capitalize on them..you would've had a better verse if ya tried ta shortin ya lines n work on your punches a little..but props ta both nice verses....
please retun the vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054
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