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Old 08-10-04, 03:26 PM   #27
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Voted For: Triple_N

^ur best lines were (Triple N) were:
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^ lmfao, altogether u had a nice structure and good flow plus every bar rhymed perfectly.. and u took the closer with:
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^really nice way to end the battle, good job!

Shabba Ranks- ur verse was good with punches, especially the opener:
Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^nice punch to start off, you have nice multis throughout but some of your lines were stretched when u tried to make them rhyme.. and sumtimes they were stretched without rhymin'..

so with that feedback i give the win to: Triple N keepin' it consistent throughout, nice quick battle y'all.. peep my links aight, ~wun~
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