View Single Post
Old 08-10-04, 03:36 PM   #19
Ill-Grammatix
Back In Business
 
Ill-Grammatix's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,332
From: Flatbush, Brooklyn
IP:

Voted For: DustyBlunted

this was a pretty weak battle but dusty took this because of his punches... not great ones but they hit a lot harder than da prodigy. dusty... work on ya structure.. lines were stretched but an overall better verse... you got at him like you was angry or sum'n

prodigy... ya first line was ya best... and that was weak... the ps2 line was terrible... explaining it made it worse... work on everything... content, wordplay, vocab, multi's, personals, punches, openers, closers, and anything else i left out.
Send a message via AIM to Ill-Grammatix Send a message via Yahoo to Ill-Grammatix