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Old 08-10-04, 04:00 PM   #5
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Voted For: Hypnotist

this was terrible... no one had one hot line in this. both verses were elementary but at least i understood hypno... both need to elevate drastically with vocab, wordplay and usage, punches, personals, multi's, openers and closers, rhymes, and structure.

the deciding factor in this was hypno's opener... elevate...please!
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