Voted For: caliph

gotta give this one to caliph...
opener was decent, punches were harder... still tryna understand that 3 line rhyme scheme but it was consistent throughout...didn't get the last line but everything else had enough going to win this...

schema had some ok lines... pretty simple and direct... the simple part killed itfor him, though. the main thing that made me vote against you was the sprayed / legs couplet... i know some people twist the sounds around in audio but this is text, homie... peole notice shyt like that when it's in front of them to read. good battle though