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Old 08-10-04, 04:44 PM   #19
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Voted For: MC_SYX

just cuz im da coldest dont me u should fear dis
even tho this is text yo hole fam goin hear it
now where is// all da muffuckin competition

weak.. no punch.. self-glory... focus on battle

i might as well go battle at tha rap olympix
got me battlin un MC_syx

structural flaws... garbage line

u couldnt win if they voted before i dropped
shootin red octagons out of my glock(stop signs)
that made ur hart go stop// yo whole crew sed syx u got got

stretched all to hell... ok punch, i guess... still kinda weak

ur records 1-1 its gonna be 1-2 like its countin
u winnin is like cristopher reeves climbin a mountain

christopher reeves lines are played... been seeing them the last two weeks.. weak closer

mc syx:
Alright let me set this bitch off, in about two seconds have you outlined in chalk,

opener played and weak... work on flow

Thinkin he's hard but you know that ain't the truth, says he's a pimp when he's the fuckin protistute,

good punch... best line of the battle so far


I'll have you down n' out gaspin for your own breath, make you scream n' shout while graspin on my homie death,

ehhh... ok i guess... needs rewording to be effective

now you lookin for a remedy tryin to pick up the pieces, while i give you mentally sexually transmitted diseases,

nice... second best line of the battle

Fuckin you telekinetically, genetically i'm still makin you feel unsettling,

didn't rhyme... blah

Oh yeah keep thinkin your hard leave you with intelectual and lyrical scars

weak closer...

mc had better vocab and the breakdown speaks for itself
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