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Old 08-10-04, 04:53 PM   #8
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

ya,fiya yook tyhis with ease in my eyes,better vocab complexity n punches pretty much nocked this kid out..good structure flow was wierd in some places but overall you had the better verse...g city..not alot of effort went in your verse from the looks of it..you lacked in alot of areas ..elevate..

fiya return the favour /grinez don't worry bout it...


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