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both poems was really hot....both had a diff approach which made it harder to choose
big chase...ya poem was really nice...i like the "right" n "left" concept. Great story telling.. i see u put much thought into ya poem...niceely done
CAliph.....ya poem simply talked about the picture....but it went deeper then just "talkin about the picture" which is why i liked ya poem so much.....u went on a whole diffrent level....and made me look at that picture in a whole diffrent way....More then just a poem on the picture...but u went deep and brought a bunch of diffrent topics which is why i think u earn my vote...for turning such a simple poem into sumthing more.....
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