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Old 08-10-04, 07:28 PM   #38
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im givin this 1 ta big cause his structure was way betta n his punches were consistent..had decnt flow 2 but som punches were played...overall betta verse...black you had a couple good punches but your structure ruined your verse..da ass crack line was your best..but i've heard it b4..still an alright verse though....your punches "1st lines"were what lost you this battle along with ya structure...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054
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