These'Internal flame's burn my heart into'Piece's, "Price-less", Like my moms mastercards-and-visa's, I havent been loved since I was my momma's-Fetus//

^^ that was sick... really feeling it kid..... nicely done

I hated life, Cuz' My dad tried to-beat-us, Only to figure out, Every hit, was love'or so he-meaned-it//
^^ that was cool.....

the 1st verse was ok noting to good but everything was decent....
the 2ed verse u elevated and drop some good lines that were preety dope nice drop....

WANNA COLLABO ON A SONG??? hit me up