<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP:
I regret battling you…but enough stallin…ill start spittin…
I got a feeling your verse is like Holyfields Ear parts are bitten
^^ok opener..played concept
Kronuz? Dude…your name sucks….what does it mean….please explain
Cause all I know is that your fate….starts at the beginning of your name(KO)
^^get more original..its ok but weak
I’ll glue his faith of winning to the ceiling to get his hopes up
The Council? More like nerds Who met at a computer club and grouped up
^^up/up.......nope don't rhyme..but ok punch
Seal any speck of hope..like kronuz was in a room with handless doors
….Ill mark him down as whack like clearance sales at clothing stores
^^..was'nt feeling this at all/worded badly
Kronuz bites lines…like a dog… his bite is worse then his bark
Surgically implant his verse in his chest..so he could be whack at heart
^^1st line sucked/2nd line was better but an average closer
there was'nt much in your verse that i thought stood up n out in this battle
you had some original ideas but wrote them badly...this verse looked rushed...
your rhyme scheme was fair....kronuz verse was'nt great but he kept his structure
better...close but i like i said by a hair kronuz gets this...
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left...2 many herbs
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