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Old 08-11-04, 07:26 AM   #2
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#Are you ennglish or american just wondering?

Anyway this was an k piece i thought you could have come more rginal because ive the strugle survive so many times.. & outlaws ehhh reminds me someone else... hmm i wonder who? well the chorus was good but are you telling the truth did you really go jail because i dont like online fakers. but if you air i respect that your writing how you feel after you been to jail.. but i noticed on verse 3 you said you ryign t better then yo switched to say you wanna illeagle hustle... lol dawg that aint getting better... Smoking Dro getting hoes.. buying clothes is all a nigga knows.... ( I'm black btw.. B.I.G said that )

7/10.

For effort.
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