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Old 08-11-04, 12:55 PM   #8
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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plz return the favor....! check the battle in the sig..
uhmm best lines throughout..:
You tell me to set up a battle and then no show? I have no Respect Fo Ya/
i'll murder u n then throw yo jacket over the pool of blood fo my girl to Step Ova/
shit, you couldn't even be ahead of me if you you Teleported/
your mouth is filth, everything that comes out you is "dead" like Abortions/
^ nice way to open battle, nice punched and wordplay.. even good vocab..

best lines from Black Plague were:
But Dope lines from him are missin, like honesty from bill clinton
If you really are the truth could u tell me why you ain't winnin?
Kid you got no struc, ya lines are fucked up and badly scattered
My flow is like the windows on 50's H2, it simply can't be shattered
^ the lines where u say his lines are fucked up and badly scattered was a really good punch... but uhmm the ending Black Plague needed a lot of work, u must have a good opener and a good closer... but overall, this seemed really one-sided and datruth pretty much took this over.. better vocab aight structure nice punches better opener and better closer, so datruth u got this..
PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR~!
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