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Old 08-11-04, 03:10 PM   #9
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Woah you experienced alot of changes?

But what i dont understand is the WORD changes is suppos to be a very motional topic

but you were tlking about gangstas in mommas house....
Thats funny but you got the wrong topic to the name
This was very hood like but i dont know how to detarmn if this is a good piece without the right name dawg. . it's ok though not to complex vocab whch i like because some things can be confusing i think you need write about 1 topic instead of talking about gangsta in mommas house then taking about your respect it was ok though
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