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Old 08-11-04, 04:10 PM   #22
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Voted For: LyrikalGladiator

lyrikal got this with better punches n way betta structure n flow...//this has ta go though,da slash is annoyin as hell...
raw killa...weak verse,seriously you need ta get betta format in ya verse..you stretch your lines way 2 long n some of it is jus garbage"no punch"n this aint a hate vote,so don't take it like that you jus got beat by a better verse....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054
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