Voted For: LyrikalGladiator

LyrikalGladiator
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is alright, i dont know why u switched it up at the end.. flow fell off a little due to the switch.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal..

raw killa
structure is ass.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchnes.. tight multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals...

Overall
raw killa had more multis.. neither had a good flow.. LyrikalGladiator had the better overall structure.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. LyrikalGladiator gets my vote..

VOTE - LYRIKALGLADIATOR