Thread: This Now...
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Old 08-11-04, 10:42 PM   #1
Phobic
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Talking This Now...

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When I hear that song...
When I see your picture...
When I sleep with my eyes shut tight...
When I hear your name...
When I get reminded of one of our inside jokes...
When I think of the year behind...
When I see the gift that wasn't given...


I let my feelings for you be strong...
I feel like expressing my love through literature...
I wish that you were with me that night...
I feel everything inside become pain...
I try to say what I want, but it comes out in small chokes...
I feel your prescence seep in to my mind...
I feel my heart and body whole stiffen...

But, that was then, this is now.
And in this now, We both love eachother.
And now I can show my feelings again wholy and unhidden.


My gf and I, the one that I wrote my other poems ("1 Month Afterward" and i forget the other name) about, both know we miss/still love eachother...But we're waiting for school to start again to start officially start going out again....So right now we're kind of unofficial bf and gf lol....But yea.
I like this poem...

So feedback please.
Will return favor.
Thanks alot!
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