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Old 08-12-04, 01:38 AM   #10
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Voted For: Calamity

Ya bars unelevated like you stuck in the ground
You gonna end up like ya avatar you keep fucking around(1)
^^ok...5/10
Got a couple victorys think they feeling you right?
But when ya losses equal half ya wins you aint lyrically nice(2)
^^6/10...bad rhyme
30 battles and not one man who respects you
Yous a bitch with balls who raps the first ''trans-text-tual''(3)
^^6/10..bad rhyme..but good wordplay
My flow multi deminsional you one sided like racial arguments
Come with ya hardest shit you no more then a target bitch
^^koo..56/10 bad rhyme
On the real stop stunting frontin bad for ya image
Im in the fourth quater and ya flow still in the scrimmage(4)
^^best line..7/10
thought it was ok but you had some issues with ya rhyme scheme that hurt ya verse..

no this battle aint the matrix, but i'll trinity ya face in..
his rhymes aint elevating, like he was spitting adjacent..
^^koo idea 7/10
Ya style aint "comming up" like you was locked in ya basement..
FOrce you to eat battery acid,now like ya rhymes,ya "Base" Sick..
^7/10..decent..
to see ya lines,id have to get "Wack" glasses, and get em focused..
its funny how he has to space his Bars just to get em Noticed..
^^7/10 nice punch
this "dynasty" warrior, is about to meat his "Empires" captain..
you flowing is like MIchael Jackson being innocent--it wont happen..
^^ahh played...5/10
you been talking shit in threads, but now i see ya hype is gone..
The only COMP. you bring to this battle is the one ya typin on..
^^8/10 good closer...

overall calamity i thought came with the better verse 4 original punches n 1's that connected...also had better structure..but both had good drops....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054
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