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Old 08-12-04, 01:41 AM   #3
Verbatim
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what's up with the half assed reply ^^^^^^

anyway


This wasn't to shabby, flow was good, structure was good for the most part,
Some of your punches didn't really hit hard

for example:

bloods and crips/gay clubs on da strip/
killa cali westside/shutup wit dat shit/

It was alright, guessing it was personal?
but it didn't really hit hard...first line was good
2nd one coulda had some more umph yeh....umph

anywho
it was an alright piece,
keep droppin
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