Voted For: lyricalflowz23
daaaaaaaaamnnnn... no offence, but by readin yo name, lyricalflowz23, id think u was a herb... -_-
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sonic:the beggingin of your verse wasntg to hot... but you picked up which is good.. it got better and better.. towards the middle to the end, it was actually good hehe.. you didnt have to much wordplay.. you were a tad bit boastful is this particular verse...thatsbrought it down a tad..
lyrical: lol...first bar would have been pretty god, but the flow was a lil messed in the second line..same with you.. its not your first half of your verse was bad, its jsut that it was a lil played.... yours just suddenly got good when you got to your 6th line.. after that it was pretty good.. saw some nice metas.. personals were in there.. but what really did it for me, is his sigplay (bar righ tbefore the last bar), and then to top it off, you had the good ass personal about him and pmin people.... not tryna start beef, cause he a good MC, but ^ thats true as hell lol.. that last bar was fire and what really won it for you.. that was put together and set up almost perfectly.. good job.. nice battle by both of you minus the first halfs
.. aight stay up