Didnt like the topic but oh well...

VIRTUE: flow was nice, vocab was ok but it lacked emotion, if your mom died i think it could use lil more emotion than this...the 15 years later part kinda killed it for me, i didnt like that stuff, your structure was better tho cuz A.K.A had the / at the end of his line which annoyed me but i missed creativity and imagery...

A.K.A.: the / annoyed me real bad, your emotion was better,vocab was good, flow was decent...liked your last line.Creativity could've been better but it was ok.

Both weren't real real good but if i gotta go with one, i chose A.K.A (despite the /), the 15 year later part from VIRTUE just killed it...

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