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wordman had punches they werent that great..it seemed like not alot of effort was put into your verse..your punches need a bit of work,need some wordplay...bestrappa...ok you did ok in the rhymin part..i liked your verse but not 4 a battl;e your had no punches n pretty stretched lines...you need ta elevate your punches alot....
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