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Old 08-12-04, 02:19 PM   #13
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Voted For: The Black Plague

Plague= yo verse was ok......you had some aight punchelines in it.....really no use of multis.....i think you coulda used betta wordplay....personals were aight........like i said at first ya verse was ok

Ridah= ya verse wasnt that good........it seemed too simple to me....you didnt have no complexity.....punchelines really didnt hit hard enough.........that personal in ya second like it really wasnt no use for it cuz it did nothing.....so keep elevatin.......
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