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Old 08-12-04, 02:32 PM   #13
fluidmoon
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Voted For: ...God...

heres the verdict:
GOD~your verse was good, you had nice wordplay,multies, flow and i can tell you know what your doing,with your use of rhymes in your multies, i liked your opening line and your closer as well,you just came a lot harder than your opponent nice job........1
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