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Old 08-12-04, 03:35 PM   #4
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sorry man, but this is wack.
the hook is VERY basic, and the verses are trash.
yall aint rappin about shit, and the very little content yall DO have is what every single rapper you hear on the radio say.
its played and comercial.
keep elevating.
find a topic and stick with it.
pz
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