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Old 08-12-04, 05:28 PM   #16
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

whoa whoa whoa..
i liked your verse alot..
good multies example:
Shyt, todays friday n another test for division....
If I only listend, 10 credits i wouldn't be missin...
Speakin of listen'n, wit mah friends i shoulda ditched.
nice job....with multies..
structure
your whole first three-fourths of ur verse nice..last was falling off
good flow
good rhymes..
i also like how ur no forcing ur rhymes..proud of u dawg
example: precentage ..regret it
and threw in a funny ender 8.0

decree wun

your verse was also hott
nice drop..he had better strcuture and flow..u had stretched lines
and i wasnt feelin ur ending at all..nicejob though 7.7/10

barely one that battle..but he did win..propz to all..
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