-The Shogun of the Dark-
From: BADMANchester, england |
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IP:
Voted For: daillest1
da illest:
wow im feelin your rhymes lyrical laxatation, especially, overall great flow bar the weakest lines (see below). but you gets my vote
hottest line:
see im causin devistation, hurt, pain n elaberation ,
to this manz mental deformitation, u got no rime stabelization,
dog wut im really sayin, iz that yo rimez is nuttin but lyrical laxitation
weakest line:
aint i tell u 2 bring it, maby u sholda tooka second 2 listen
so tell me, u called da best... i mean u really aint even that hot
BrOTheRP.A.R.A.: teheres nothing especially wrong with you flow but no offense dof it sounds a lil rushed. i did like youur them and your raw rhymes were on point but i think you should of tryed readin it thru
strongest line:
I'm tryin to understand why im not in the band//
caught you in your room wackin it
you jizzed all over your hand//.
(im guessing thats how you read it)
weakest line:
you went out side and bought some bling//
i told you that you got a nice ring//
and asked you where you got that thing//
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